Research & Discussion
Lawrence and book production
Review commentary by Jeremy Wilson on Lawrence, the Uncrowned King of Arabia by Michael Asher(London, Viking, 1998) previous page | Page 2 | next page |
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| 9/1/1 | "unkempt park". On what evidence does Asher think that the grounds of South Hill were "unkempt"? |
| 9/1/2 | Thomas Chapman "forsook his inheritance and his culture for ever". He did not. He had personal investments and received a substantial income from the family estate for the rest of his life (as Asher notes on pp. 14-15). As for "culture", it is difficult to see what definition of the word would fit Asher's dramatic implication. |
| 9/1/4 | "in defiance they". A minor point, but this is sloppy writing or copy-editing. "They" could refer to any combination of Thomas, Sarah, and Edith. |
| 9/ | The commentary on English morality at that period, as a setting for the Thomas/Sarah relationship, makes a point worth making. Asher was possibly inspired here by Victoria Ocampo's footnote (338171 T.E., London, Gollancz, 1963, p. 19) on which he draws elsewhere. Regrettably, he does not later apply a similar historical approach in order to understand the kind of indoctrination about girls and sexuality that English society imposed upon middle-class boys at that time. |
| 10/2/13 | "First they made a heady jump to the English home counties, settling at Fawley on Southampton Water." Why is this move from Dinard to Southampton - a ferry-journey apart - a "heady jump"? A copy-editing point: Hampshire is not one of the English Home Counties. |
| pp.11-12 | The
portrait of the Lawrence family life on these pages seems to be based
mainly on Celandine Kennington's unpublished memoir of Sarah Lawrence.
This draft was intended as part of a longer book, never completed. It
was written
in the closing years of Mrs Kennington’s life, and one of the author's
chief motives was to defend Lawrence against attacks by Richard
Aldington. Internal evidence shows that the "memories" it
contains drew on published sources - as is common if not inevitable in documents written many years after the event. Celandine Kennington, wife of the artist Eric Kennington, was not a neighbour of the Lawrences, as is incorrectly suggested here - either at this or at any other period. She did not meet the Lawrence family until after the Great War, when the father and two of the brothers were dead and two of the other sons had left home. Therefore, her observations can only be based on later knowledge - for the most part much later knowledge - of Sarah Lawrence. Her comments about the relationship between Sarah Lawrence and T.E.L. must be based mainly on her observation of the relationship - under very different circumstances - between Sarah and her eldest son Bob, who was not in the least like T.E.L.. Finally, in reading Celandine's account, one must remember that her attitude towards TEL had a very strong emotional element (she believed that he had saved her life, see T. E. Lawrence by his Friends p. 311). While the Thomas and Sarah did not socialise at Oxford in the "socialite" sense, they certainly had friends. However, their friends (as in many families) were often different. For example, Thomas was a member of the Oxford Union, a status open to certain local residents. He used the Union regularly as a convenient central-Oxford club, and met people there. Next page |
T. E. Lawrence chronology
1888 16 August: born at Tremadoc, Wales
1896-1907: City of Oxford High School for Boys
1907-9: Jesus College, Oxford, B.A., 1st Class Hons, 1909
1910-14: Magdalen College, Oxford (Senior Demy), while working at the British Museum's excavations at Carchemish
1915-16: Military Intelligence Dept, Cairo
1916-18: Liaison Officer with the Arab Revolt
1919: Attended the Paris Peace Conference
1919-22: wrote Seven Pillars of Wisdom
1921-2: Adviser on Arab Affairs to Winston Churchill at the Colonial Office
1922 August: Enlisted in the Ranks of the RAF
1923 January: discharged from the RAF
1923 March: enlisted in the Tank Corps
1923: translated a French novel, The Forest Giant
1924-6: prepared the subscribers' abridgement of Seven Pillars of Wisdom
1927-8: stationed at Karachi, then Miranshah
1927 March: Revolt in the Desert, an abridgement of Seven Pillars, published
1928: completed The Mint, began translating Homer's Odyssey
1929-33: stationed at Plymouth
1931: started working on RAF boats
1932: his translation of the Odyssey published
1933-5: attached to MAEE, Felixstowe
1935 February: retired from the RAF
1935 19 May: died from injuries received in a motor-cycle crash on 13 May
1935 21 May: buried at Moreton, Dorset